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Wow. Worse than I expected.

The writing in this is so weird. For descriptive moments to arrange the scene, it's okay as it's very precise and almost clinical. For the dialog, though, that style is terrible. It's stilted, overly formal in places and forcibly casual in others making it just weird to browse. If it were a newer title, I'd honestly wonder if it was written by AI.

Completely ignoring the setups for each scene that serve as some semblance of plot doesn't support. For erotica, it's also a break down. Especially in the first and longest story. I approve with Nick that being a bottom does not lessen you as a man or person yet Bud and their women delight in demeaning Nick for accepting this terrible dare. I'm not opposed to humiliation and the crude talk is often what I check out a story like this for, but there's just nothing sexy or arousing about it in these stories. Again, I think that comes down to the weirdness of the writing. Nothing feels natural or chemical-free and